Thread:Wikichanu/@comment-11883116-20190801125409

Hi. I've checked and corrected Ouaka and Sainaga pages that you've created, along with some other edits. Allow me to give you some pieces of advice in the bullet form: That's all. Hope it helped. Have fun editing! :D 
 * Don't upload fan art, unless you know how to properly source it.
 * Try working on summarizing the events and on linking sentences. You've written long sentences that could be separated into several shorter ones.
 * Avoid quotes in the Canon section. There is a Quote section for them, after all. They can be added if there's not much to write about the ship, though.
 * Avoid sentences such as "The ship sailed as a result of" in the Canon section. Canon section is just for summarizing the interactions between characters involved. Sentences describing formation of the ship and such fall under Fanon section category.
 * Remember that DR's freetime events are written as "Free Time Events". Similar capitalization goes for other modes as well (Love Across the Universe, Love Suite).
 * Again in the case of DR ships, remember that the events of the bonus modes (including Free Time Events) are considered of a different level of canonicty than the main plot. So when listing their status in the infobox, remember to include the status that they have in the main story. This is especially the case for ships such as Hinazumi or Sairuma, where the one-sided attraction only happens in the bonus modes, but not in the main story.
 * Remove unnecessary elements of the infobox, for example "aka" if you don't know the ship's other names. Someone who knows other names can just add this part later on.