Thread:RABNerd VP/@comment-43957789-20200109225004/@comment-30196210-20200109230140

Hi,

Please don't take this badly when I say that the page is a mass of bad grammar and wording. It also seems from what I can tells that you're placeing some fanon stuff in the canon section, and the moments aren't exactly moments. Moments are for smaller things that don't really take a lot of attention. Such as quick conversations/interactions.

Hope this helps!