User blog comment:RABNerd VP/No-Stub September 2019/@comment-26244866-20190831175730/@comment-30196210-20190831182336

Bashwing: A lot of the paragraphs were one sentence long, and not really paragraphs so much as random phrases.

Stealthstlinger: See above, and below.

Torcher: Needs a longer Canon section. I would suggest doing this by describing each of the characters briefly.

Zamo: Same as before.

Basically a lot of sentences, and not a lot of paragraphs.